I feel similarly, and I think (hope) you will like the direction that this story goes. I struggle so much with rationalizing Jay’s behavior in any way that doesn’t still make him out to be the villain in Hailey’s story. Even as I’ve been working on the next few chapters, I feel like I’m maybe getting close to understanding how he might have been thinking/feeling when he decided to up and leave the country. Hopefully I can incorporate some of that into future chapters. Thank you for reading and commenting!
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FairyTaleTrainWreck on Chapter 1 Mon 07 Aug 2023 10:29AM UTC
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