!!! I really like this so far! The fact that Danny is college-age is interesting because not only does it allow him to be more familiar/grown in with his powers, but it also creates another difference between him and class-1A. (Now, I could see this going a mentor route instead of a fellow student route!)
It’s also nice that you established relationships and character info before diving into the actual crossover part; that’s something important most people forget because they’re excited to get to the good part (which is valid; I’m not slamming anyone. Just appreciating this :)). The only thing I’ll mention is that it’s Nighteye, not Nighteyes <3. I’m excited to read more!
Oh man. You're only on chapter one. XD Expect a LOT of character building lol. I'm excited for you to read more! Chapter 6-7+ is where it starts to heat up. :D OH. oop. Whelp. I'll try and remember to change that. XD I say it with the "s".
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pr3tty_pumpk1n on Chapter 1 Sun 20 Aug 2023 08:55PM UTC
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