I took a while to come over to this fic, wanting a break between this and the first. Your tone is relentless and it has a fantastic impact, hits everything I want, and I wanted to be able to immerse in it without exactly remembering it. Idk if I can describe.
Honestly, it’s a fantastic addition. I do personally want more alterations to John; he clings to his humanity in a way the Slayer never could, and stripping that slowly from him would really break him, I think. I really enjoy this, shamelessly
Hmm, not sure about the word to describe that exact situation... but I'm there's a term out there somewhere. Glad to hear you are enjoying it either way! And I agree, it's fun to have a toy that takes more time to break properly. The process adds a fun flavor to the pain wine.
Just want to say, do look out for chapter 7. There's going to be a fun little surprise that adds to the two's experience I hope can increase the chaos of their situation. ヽ(￣ω￣(￣ω￣〃)ゝ
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