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  1. WHAT A SATISFYING ENDING AAAA

    Once again I held off reading this cause I didnt want it to end lmaooo. Not it actually is over 😭 What a ride! This was a fantastic journey and I am super happy with this satisfying epilogue.

    Ngl I was expecting a wedding epilogue! But a spicy one works too 😂🔥 thank you so much again for writing this. I would love bits of Lotor's POV especially their first meeting. I am subscribed to you so I would know immediately when you post a new story. Cant wait to read more from you and see some more of your pretty art 😍🩷💜

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    1. Thank you very much for taking the time to read the story!!! 🥺🙏 I am so happy that the ending is satisfying yayy!! Mission accomplished! 😁

      And no worries at all, the weeks leading up to the story's finale had me in a strange limbo where I wasn't sure if I was sad about it ending, and now it's finally hit me 😭 So I totally get it!

      I confess I had considered a wedding epilogue! However I decided to go with something different because for one, in my mind it would be several months before either of them felt the chaos died down just enough to plan and execute a wedding, and I didn't wany too big of a time skip. And two I felt such an ending might have been a bit cliche or too predictable, so I went with a 🔥spicier🔥 ending taking place only three weeks after the trial 😆

      I definitely want to write their first meeting from Lotor's POV and I hope I can find time to do it soon! Thank you again for reading this story and for leaving your comments! They were always a joy to read! Have a wonderful weekend!! 😊💖💜

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