Comment on Of Badly Hidden Lies (and figuring out cool magic shit)

  1. Jaz (Guest) on Chapter 13 Sat 02 Sep 2023 03:40PM UTC

    Yeah. Seems you love cheating Lily. Lily wouldn't have cheated on James ever. Or maybe you don't understand love enough. That no matter how much disagreement, or spat those who love don't cheat on their partner even when drunk. Or do you cheat on your partner in a difficult time? As for Harry, you didn't even make Harry's adoption to Potter Family permanent, not even Potter looks. Harry deserves James as a father and his looks. Not that bullying selfish git Snape. Didn't even let Harry read his parents letters. In ritual, you didn't let him talk to his parents but to a diety who is useless to him nor any help to him. Made your concept and writing pretty confusing too. No matter how much I like good Ron, Neville and Hermione stories.

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    1. ZoomieZoomie324 on Chapter 13 Sat 02 Sep 2023 05:01PM UTC

      Woah, hey man. Thanks for the comment, truthfully, but have you even actually read this fanfic? If you did, you’d know this is book 1 of 3. Not everything is going to be resolved in book 1. But accusing me of cheating on my own partner? What the fuck man? If you actually read this, Lily DIDNT CHEAT ON JAMES. James couldn’t have kids. But, as I’m pretty sure you didn’t do much more then skim this, maybe you missed that. And death, as I’ve already explained in author notes, WILL BE EXPLAINED IN THE SECOND BOOK!!!! But of course, it wasn’t instant Harry, James, and Lily fun so why would you care.

      This might sound rude, but you’re a guest account, how do I know if your writing is any better then mine?

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