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  1. Just passing by (Guest) on Chapter 1 Mon 04 Sep 2023 04:09AM UTC

    Interesting start I'll follow, but I found Cinder's appearance strange.

    As Ruby is turning three, so this is 12 years before Canon, Cinder is someone between 20-23 (25 max) and in her flashback, she was 15 when she killed Rhodes. Summer guessed by her appearance that she was at least 17.

    I also found Summer's actions strange, after finding out that she worked for Salem and that she wanted to take Ruby, she should do something like Kill first and ask questions later.

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    1. TheWolfThatWaits on Chapter 1 Mon 04 Sep 2023 03:33PM UTC

      I gloss over breifly in the tags, but I've made Cinder 10-15 years older in this fic, because I think the story I want to tell works better with Cinder rather than an OC.

      Also, I agree that Summer would kill first, ask questions later. That's why when Cinder reveals who she works for, Summer immediately tries to stab her in the throat :p

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