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  1. Raitnrong Sun 24 Sep 2023 03:36AM UTC

    OHGHH !!!cute, cute, cuuuuteee!!!!!!!! oh gosh dang it i cant believe im obsessing over pokemon relationships but akfjakdj this is just tooooo good!!!! hrngggg i love it so much???? it shocked me WIDE awake istg (✿ʘᴗʘ)<333333

    omg you weren't kidding when you'd said it was weird but hot DAMN can you make bangers out of everything because i am still so into this!! ʕ´• ᴥ•̥`ʔʕ´• ᴥ•̥`ʔ a hundred percenttt invested !!! :3cccc

    as always, i /adore/ your narrative stylings so much, op! ^^ your writing feels like home to me at this point and its refreshing to see it once more in your new fic! (*˘︶˘*).｡*♡ i love the unintended conswquence of your usual eloquent writing style giving a sort of natgeo documentary-esque touch to this fic w the mice!! >:3333 its so good!! (yet steamy heheheh :'333 mustve been all that body heat and melted snow ~u~<333)

    huhuhhhh mouse nobori is as diligent as you'd expect!!! ;w;;;; he is quite the early fletching swooping in like that! his body having automated the need to mate his sibling as his highest priority!! enough to get something //done// as early as possible. claim mouse kudari as soon as he can >:333

    and it's such a vivid landscape that you've snapped right there as we read along!! ~w~!!!! OwO
    the descriptions of tandemice as halflings,, how imperative it is for them to find a might ASAP. the burrowing of polite nbr naking sure to close their little cubby hole,, and all that mounting (hehe) activity!! whooh!!

    ksksksk, its quite the fun ride!! quite filthy in its own way!!! poor kdr getting the wake up call of his life uwu
    almost anyone can take him so its a good thing his diligent nii-san is there to make sure he doesnt find himself accosted by any strangers uwuuuuuu hehehhh what a good older brother to mate his little sibling so quickly<33333
    just pure instinct for the both of them to connect as deeply as possible (｡ﾉω＼｡)(๑♡⌓♡๑)3333

     

    oh goshhh i know its weird and all but i still rly appreciate you writing these so much!!! each concept of these twins coming from you is worth as much as a star in the sky and this proves it! :DD i really do love that you've published this fic as fs you'll be tormenting me w a lowkey hunger of more tandenbkd from now on ;;w;;;;; best to keep your readers on their toes after all!! >:DD(｡•̀ᴗ-)✧!!

    thank you so much!!! you are pure starlight in author form!! ;w;;; i love you!!!!!!!!

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    1. Nemidari Sun 24 Sep 2023 04:51AM UTC

      Wow, what a comment for a short and unusual (and kinda experimental) fic! Thank you so much! <3333
      Yeah, I can't believe I'm obsessing over pokemon relationships either... but tandemaus are just too cute!

      I suppose the writing style did cause things to end up like a documentary lolol, at least in the beginning.
      Mouse nobori has certainly got his priorities straight! >:3
      With an early rise and a biological need to fulfil, he's very fortunate that he already has a partner in mind! (even if it's his own sibling uwu)
      Any other halfling would likely be facing quite the conundrum!

      I suppose mouse kudari is verrrry lucky that his brother is here to bond them as soon as possible. It's certainly better than being mounted by some stranger, or potentially losing the competition between the other rodents and dying early as a result. And of course, his reliable older sibling isn't gonna let any of that happen :3

      A strange fic from my strange brain, but I'm happy that it was enjoyable nonetheless! I am honoured that you think of these concepts so highly, even though some of them may or may not be kinda cursed lolol. Ah, the tandenbkd (lol) has been and will continue to torment me too...

      Thank you for reading and commenting! It's always a delight to receive your thoughts and feedback, and your kind praise effectively turns me into a happy lil puddle on the ground (~v~) Love ya too!

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