I AM GOING TO CRY 😭😭 this is genuinely beautiful. the imagery at the end?? I AM FROTHING. the line “He dreamt of dead animals watching him with blank and judgmental eyes as he slit their stomachs, deconstructing their organs piece by piece just to feel what it was like to be the cock that was ripping him open.” IS LITERALLY ONE OF THE BEST PIECES OF LIKE??? EMOTION??? I HAVE HEARD ON THIS PLATFORM kudos kudos kudos i cannot wait to see where this goes oh my gosh
🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤 Thank you, genuinely. There are a lot of lines sprinkled throughout this fic that I am highkey very proud of, if you don't mind me being conceited, but to hear someone say that it's one of the hardest lines on the platform has me floored in a very very good way. I really hope you stick around and that you enjoy the upcoming chapters. I have a lot of horrible shit planned but also many good things planned. auuuuugh and then I thought of a way to make the line you just posted better because I keep going back to pick at this I am fucking incorrigible.
YESS of course!!! i am genuinely so so so excited to see where this fic goes 😭😭 this has me on the edge of my seat and i am AUAFAUAGH i dont even have the words <3 THIS IS BEAUTIFUL I AM SO EXCITED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER
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