Ok this story is lovely. I love it. Can't call it the best story ever honestly since it's on chapter 3 and there is honestly much more that will happen. But it has the potential to be one of the best I read. I really like your style. Like the way you describe the scenes and the conversations. I know we all have different tastes but your style is exactly the way I like mine. By the way I am practicing becoming a beta for writers but for now it's not official. If you would like I can comment on each chapter some grammar or spelling and general mistakes in a comment. You can delete the comment after fixing them if you like. But yeah it would be my honor to help amazing writers. Of course this is only if you feel comfortable with it.
Wow thank you so much! I'm happy you're enjoying it! Please feel free to leave your recommendations on every chapter! I'm hoping to improve my writing and struggle with dyslexia and ADHD so I'm grateful for any help!
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