Comment on The Best Worst Kept Secret in Ketterdam

  1. bloodofkingsonmytrousers on Chapter 1 Wed 15 Nov 2023 05:57AM UTC

    GUESS WHO’S BACK! i’m starting from the beginning because i don’t want to miss out on any of your *impeccable* symbolism and callbacks

    “Back on Kaz’s window, feeding the crows, unless they’ve stopped coming while she’s been gone.” “And maybe he’s hardened in her absence.” i think, to some extent, inej doesn’t quite believe that she has an impact on things even when she isn’t present there herself. she’s too used to vanishing without a trace, and it’s novel to her to *want* there to be a trace, something that can attest to her time spent there and away. kaz, meanwhile, sees her shadow on every rooftop

    “He looks amusingly bereft now that Inej has taken the little girl.” i want to hug specht

    aaaaahhhh i missed this fic so much <3333

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    1. FairytalesOfForever on Chapter 1 Wed 15 Nov 2023 12:31PM UTC

      Pencil and flower petals

      OMG HI!! as it happens, I just finished a re-read ms elf and made a few tiny fixes and a whole lot of notes, so it’ll be interesting to se if we notice the same things hehe.

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