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  1. Captain8771 on Chapter 3 Sun 19 Nov 2023 11:09AM UTC

    Niko from OneShot

    this chapter never gets easier.

    > “That’s easy! We get—” Frisk yelped instead of finishing her sentence as the floor shook and the walls around them rumbled very violently and very suddenly.

    ITS GOING DOWN

    > Frisk’s heart dropped. Undyne leaped at him, roaring. He struck her down without even looking at her.

    tHE DISRESPECT

    > There was a flash, like a sunbeam penetrating up through the ground and a voice roared out. Undyne loomed up from the rubble, covered in spikes, eyes like fire.
    > “NGGAAAAAH, YOU THINK I’M DONE?! YOU GOTTA TRY HARDER THAN THAT!” she screamed into the howling wind. “YOU WANT DETERMINATION?! I AM DETERMINATION!” A second spear came to her like lightning and she leapt at the walking abomination, stabbing into its legs with such fury and speed that she began to crack it.

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    > Beside her, Papyrus stretched a hand out and his magic drew up bones that begun to spin so fast in place that they became whirling disks.

    *helicopter noises*

    > He cupped her cheek and his magic flared up blue in his hand, cool and comforting against her skin.

    preparations are complete.

    > Whatever they said next disappeared into the echoes of a cave. Frisk opened her eyes and blinked up into the droplets of water weeping down the walls around her. She sat up quickly, her hands pressing through a field of golden flowers.

    i cant help but notice i missed when paps put his magic on frisk's face. was it when frisk was sleeping in that scene last chapter where sans did it to undyne, alphys, and tori?

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    1. Captain8771 on Chapter 3 Sun 19 Nov 2023 11:27AM UTC

      Niko from OneShot

      im gonna have to take a break here before i cry my eyes out holy shit lmao, but i do have some notes going about a certain something coming up in later chapters :3 so its not for nothin'

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      1. SparkTheBarkivist on Chapter 3 Tue 21 Nov 2023 06:17PM UTC

        It's a mediocre picture of a wolf in a blanket with a cup of tea.

        SORRY FOR THE TEARS EEEEEEEE

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        1. Captain8771 on Chapter 3 Tue 21 Nov 2023 10:20PM UTC

          Niko from OneShot

          DONT BE SORRY IT MEANS YOU WRITE GOOD EEEEEEEEE

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    3. SparkTheBarkivist on Chapter 3 Tue 21 Nov 2023 06:17PM UTC

      It's a mediocre picture of a wolf in a blanket with a cup of tea.

      There's a moment where Paps rests his hand on Frisk's head, it's close to a time when Sans also did it, so Sans's magic carried over on its own. That's when the memories stuck to her. :D

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      1. Captain8771 on Chapter 3 Tue 21 Nov 2023 10:20PM UTC

        Niko from OneShot

        ah, i see!

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