Comment on A Veil of Lies

  1. Okay I know I commented on a few chapters before, but I want to reread this again because this fic is so good. The amount of personality you gave the 2d cardboard cutout of evil known as PMD Darkrai is iconic.

    Ahahaha! Darkrai in true Darkrai-The-Amazing-Planner fashion almost annihilated his scheme on the first paragraph. Beautiful!

    "did this bird just insult Darkrai’s non-existent, just-now-invented parents? Oh, he is going to regret that" Our mastermind schemer (who is 100% in control of all situations and has no plans go out of his control) everyone.

    Beaten by the old "make up a name that's actually a person" bit. I love it.
    And this was the day a bank teller accidentally adopted a nightmare god. XD
    But seriously, its really sweet how Dareios directs his cousin with anger (and world domination) issues towards pranking as a hobby.

    I adore the concept.
    The hilariousness of Darkrai deciding to impersonate the human's best friend, who never showed up and therefore never has to hide a body from the time-space continuum (again, what brilliant planning), unknowingly ends up bunking in said best friend's house, and is not putting two and two together.
    Cue the first, but certainly not last, of: Darkrai, you played yourself.

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