Comment on The hardest thing to ask for.

  1. FFcrazy15 on Chapter 2 Tue 19 Dec 2023 08:28PM UTC

    Nicely done. I liked how you wrote the panic attack (don't have them myself mind, but it was evocative from what I could tell). "turning off the shower and lights with a sound like a plasma grenade arming" was a particularly good line.

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