The first chapter was very good! I really enjoyed being dropped right into the plot but there was still A LOT of world building and character developement.
I got a sense of what kind of world this is (and some underlying conflict) and what kind of person our main character is (headstring and stubborn lol).
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dashka12 on Chapter 1 Tue 26 Dec 2023 11:57PM UTC
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