Kim getting Stephen to vet the procedure is an oddly simple solution to reassure Jack so he can stop being so stubborn about Kim trying to save him! I also like Renee's POV here, namely the conflict that she's still feeling but also the fact that she is very much concerned about him.
And Happy New Year to you, too! Very intrigued that you've taken a liking to my idea!
Yeah, Kim knows her dad well, despite how long it's been for them! And we can be pretty sure Stephen would give his approval.
Glad you enjoyed Renee's POV, too! I think this period of time when she's just getting to know Jack but very intrigued by him is just really interesting.
I have another chapter I'm working on first, but yep - looking forward to seeing where your prompt takes me. :)
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