Yaaay an update! What a fun chapter! I smiled so hard when drunk Phil was stroking Dan's dimple, confessing he wanted to ask him if he had one. :))) Your writing is so pleasing to read. It's just so good, and I don't see any grammar mistakes and the punctuation is on point (though this is not my mother language) and that makes a great story like this even more easy and nice to read. I am looking forward to the next chapter! <3
Thank you so much! Dimples are so great, I reveal way too much of myself writing this stuff. You touch that dimple, Phil. Follow your dreams. But for real, thank you! Especially about my punctuation being on point, omg, that means a lot bc I'm all over the place, seriously. <3 <3 I'm really glad you enjoyed it! (and sorry about how long it's been, wow)
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