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  1. Account Deleted on Chapter 11 Wed 24 Aug 2016 10:02AM UTC

    Ah Vetinari, his self awareness and realisation of the effects of his actions.... His fantasy during his period of unconsciousness is particularly poignant, as it taps into his deep rooted and hidden desire for the family he will never have with Sybil. I feel quite sorry for him :(

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    1. dharmageek on Chapter 11 Wed 31 Aug 2016 05:26AM UTC

      Thank you for the feedback. I almost felt back for Vetinari but it is part of his journey and he had a little bit of Karma coming to him. I am glad you are enjoying the story and I really appreciate the feedback.

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