Comment on [conduct] not unbecoming men that [strive] with gods

  1. Sm0lAvidReader on Chapter 2 Sun 25 Feb 2024 04:17PM UTC

    I think you did an incredible job on Percy’s angst. Plus I loved the descriptions of his powers and the mention of him growing into the appearance of a dangerous aspect of Poseidon. It really does fit given the canon descriptions of him and it makes sense that Percy would be a bit unsettled by that realization. But I also love how Paul and Sally have been so supportive and caring and done their best to remind Percy that they think he’s a good person and he might be stressing out about this more than needed. Yeah, you did a great job with this chapter. Thanks for writing and sharing,

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