I loved this so much! I feel like Lucius and Narcissa origin stories are so rare. I love how you write time passage through this fic, it's really well done. It doesn't feel rushed but it doesn't feel too slow either! The line: “Promise me it’ll always be like this,” Narcissa turned to look at Lucius, his grey eyes searching hers. “I want a life that’s full of joy, and laughter.” has me screaming because we know what's going to happen and it's making me feel ALL THE FEELS! This was amazing and I'm so excited for the next chapter.
Thank you! Honestly I was really worried about the amount of time that passes and if I'm rushing it as there is so much content to get through. Ahaha Chapter 6 is currently being written and edited so keep an eye out ;)
I love the time passage. It reminds me of the original books. I have a hard time staying with fanfics that move too slow and put in too many details (although some people love those domestic additions and I respect that, it's just not for me) :D Thank you for writing!
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