AFDSGGFSGDS your summary of the letter has me CACKLING like yeah that sure is accurate-- giving the most concerning life update and wrapping it up with a "don't worry :)" . very forsyth thing to do.
the pov switching was very fun as well, i've been so antsy to post this chapter because it introduces python pov :D there's a lot more back-and-forths in upcoming chapters too- i like getting to show the different sides of what's happening since they have SUCH different perspectives on, like, everything
and i'm glad you like the dialogue!! i worked so hard on trying to make it feel like dialogue they could say in the game (well, plus the swearing, because there's no way python wouldn't say fuck given the chance) - i watched their supports a bunch and referenced their other in-game dialogue to get the mannerisms down. there are actually a couple lines scattered throughout the whole story that are direct quotes from their supports, if you keep an eye out
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lucethewizbard on Chapter 2 Sat 16 Mar 2024 04:11PM UTC
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