Comment on Nightcap @ Shorty's

  1. nordaz68 (Guest) Wed 07 Sep 2016 05:54AM UTC

    I really enjoyed the naughty part of the story, but for the first time I disliked Waverly. Like why on earth did she want to make Nicole jealous. I feel like Nicole was too forgiven. I'll be looking forward to see how you redeem Waverly.

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    1. RonWeasleyIsMyKing Wed 07 Sep 2016 11:38PM UTC

      Dude For sure. And I know it's OC of Waverly, but personally, I like the idea of her being hesitant and almost scared of totally jumping in 100% straight up with Nicole. Obviously, I LOVE how the show did it, but since they did such a perfect job, I wanted to make their journey a bit more difficult! If it were me, I know I'd be pulling a Waverly... Seriously, thanks for taking the time to review. and this is no longer a one-shot so stay tuned my friend!

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      1. nordaz68 (Guest) Thu 08 Sep 2016 08:06AM UTC

        Ah ok. Besides that I think your writing is superb. Thank you for your work.

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