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  1. gathering_storm_61 on Chapter 3 Thu 21 Mar 2024 01:02AM UTC

    Aaron's being infected with the Neil josten effect "I will trash talk about the other teams just to piss them off" and I love it
    OMG THE PARALLEL WITH CHAPTER TWO AS IN AARON RAMBLING ABOUT MEDICAL STUFF WHILE KEVIN'S LISTENING
    is it bad that I just want the fic to be kevaaron rambling about their special interest to eachother ???

    Oh okay beginning of the angst
    Okay I have to say I love the way you portrayed Kevin's trauma of the nest, the complexity of his relationship with riko because they grew up together ans it's the only friendship example that he ever had, the contrast with jean's situation...

    Scratch that, can we murder riko already ??
    I'm scared for jean

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    1. sunndy2 on Chapter 3 Thu 21 Mar 2024 06:24AM UTC

      Aaron & Neil are so similar but yeah… maybe I‘ll give Aaron some Neil features because Neil won‘t be there so much 🥲

      I think we all need a FanFic in which Kevin & Aaron are the nerds they are 😌

      Yes!! Riko was always such an important and big part in Kevin’s life. He did a lot of bad things but I believe that it must be hard for Kevin to distinguish between the boy he met as a kid and the man Riko is now.

      Jean (unfortunately) will be tortured the most because he is less than property in the eyes of Riko. He doesn’t have any value so it‘s okay to hurt him.

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      1. gathering_storm_61 on Chapter 3 Sun 24 Mar 2024 10:57AM UTC

        Yes, i'm still sad we didn't have aaron & neil trauma bonding in canon, they had so much potential !

        rip neil, you will be missed :,)

        YES WE DEFINITELY NEED IT

        Exactly, that's why i love kevin centric ff, because we can see/explore kevin trauma of growing in the nest, surrounded by ppl who didn't know him, who mostly didn't pay attention to him beside the fact that he was good at exy and the son of Kayleigh.
        And then here comes riko, he was far from perfect, far from good even but he took interest in kevin, he was paired with him so they spend all of their time together and it was the closest thing to a friend that kevin ever has.
        Plus they knew each other since they were kids and i don't think jid riko was that bad, i mean he wasn't a great person obviously but i think things changed radically when i became captain. Sooo

        noooo don't hurt my boy 😭

        (i realized i wrote wayy too much sorry lmao)

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