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  1. JustMeForever on Chapter 2 Sun 24 Mar 2024 07:17PM UTC

    Kudos
    I like how you interpreted the difference between magic like with Ezra and Bisca.
    and just how you made it feel like it’s actually tangible in this world with your explanation of rune magic. It just feels really alive I suppose.

    I also really really like the dynamic you set up between Mystogan and Fea it’s just really cute and makes me all fuzzy inside!!!

    This whole chapter just gives so many character dynamics I really like it.

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    1. Roshen on Chapter 2 Fri 05 Apr 2024 01:30AM UTC

      Myst and Fae becoming a duo was unplanned when this story began, but it's now one of my favorite relationships to write and explore.

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