First of all I've loved this a lot so far! I'm a sucker for police procedural and this has a bit of "True Detective" and Seven vibes that I couldn't possibly not write a comment to let you know :D:D I adore Derek's bushy brows who speak volumes if you know how to read them, the Hale family and how they "adopted" Stiles, the mature relationship between Lydia, Stiles and Parrish and Stiles struggle with alchoolism. But most of all I love how you made 'em older! yay! I'm new to this fandom but so far this is one of the few fics with this setting. Stiles pushing 40s must be a total silver fox btw :D Did he and Derek have the same age gap as in the series?
Besides my gushing I still feel that the connection between the victims is Stiles :| the ward could be William Barrow because he is in the Criminal Ward at eichen, the Heart Derek and the Father the Sheriff? I'm probably wrong but that's even better :D Thanks for this!
Oh wow...I don't even know where to begin...thank you SO SO much for your lovely comment. It means so much to see someone enjoying my little story so much! So thank you for taking the time to comment and let me know as it really does help feed the muses! As for the age gap, I would say about the same. Stiles is about 38 in this fic and Derek is about 42. So roughly the same kind of age gap. It's really interesting to see your thoughts...I'm not giving anything away though!! You'll just have to wait and see :P Again, thank you so much for your comment. Literally made my day <3
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