The way this story was original set up, this would have been the first chapter of part three, so it would have been obvious from the start. But this felt like exactly the right surprise for the story to start with, so I reworked everything to begin here so that I'd get this reaction. I'm thrilled it shocked you! It's never completely certain when you're the author, so you know what's going to be revealed, and it's hard to know if it works or not until the reader says so. Jonathan does seem to be a much kinder vampire to his victims and his familiar than Dracula. Now we get to find out how they got here.
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Dacelin on Chapter 1 Wed 03 Apr 2024 11:26AM UTC
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