Okay okay I have been cackling at all the way through, but I let a whole guffaw at this and thus had to break the seal and comment:
“Don’t you rustle your mustache at me, sir,” she said to his back.
Anyway. I really love the mix of playful banter and panty-melting action that you've got going on here. Ryann is hilarious, and Dom!Harvey is delicious.
He should keep that thing on a leash. It's dangerous 😂 but thank you for the compliments, I love writing their banter, it's probably my favorite part of writing this entire thing. Aside from making Harv a little soft dom mess of a man anyway!
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