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  1. Anonymous Creator on Chapter 2 Wed 10 Apr 2024 07:25AM UTC

    Thank you so much! As I said, I will be working with there connection a lot in this story. (He will have a lot of explaining why he has a female snowy owl that is "almost" identical to Harry Potters lol.

    It also shows his caretaking nature, which us obviously so important for my version of the character.

    Yeah I might decide to make his pureblood coach a role in the story, if only a mild one.

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    1. 1000Ducks on Chapter 2 Thu 11 Apr 2024 10:24AM UTC

      No problem mate! I can’t wait to see more Hedwig, she’s an icon (seeing Harry trying to explain will also be hilarious loll)

      I didn’t think about his care taking skills at first, but yeah looking back at the chapter it really does demonstrate them! Especially how in tuned he is with other living things.

      The coach would be a pretty cool character to have, maybe he could be more involved when he finishes the course, like he shows up in person to congratulate him and give him his certificate. Just an idea!

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      1. Anonymous Creator on Chapter 2 Thu 11 Apr 2024 10:36AM UTC

        Yes. Yes, all of this.

        I am actually writing the next chapter now, and I am about 900 ish words in, but it's planned to be quite long, and this one is really slow going. The coach is definitely featured a little in this, but I guess he's almost treated a little like the diary lol, he comes to him for advice and thinks about him but he doesn't really know all that much - loving the certification idea. This chapter is painful, cause it features the transformation and I REALLY don't want it to come off like one of those Disney channel scenes where they take the glasses off and a different girl is beneath LMAO.

        That's like my worst nightmare, so I'm adding some hilarity.

        <33

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        1. 1000Ducks on Chapter 2 Thu 11 Apr 2024 03:37PM UTC

          Ooo cool, good luck writing it, even if it is slow going haha

          It makes sense for Harry to go to his coach, he’s probably one of the few reliable role models in his life right now, and he would definitely be second guessing himself so much, like what style clothes he should wear or what fabric they should be, you know

          Ahh transformations and major character changes/growth can be so difficult to write well, I feel your pain lmao

          As long as you really show Harry’s thought process, it should turn out well (at least better than a Disney transformation lol) you could also show Harry struggling with it a bit, show that he actually had to learn to act like that, good luck with it though!

          Hilarity can fix 93.5% of problems, most of the time lol

          (Glad you liked my idea <3, you don’t have to follow through with it, but it could be a nice way to introduce him in person)

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