Chaaali (Guest)
on Chapter 9
Thu 18
Apr 202402:35PM UTC
Not me kicking my and giggling like a psycho getting ready for the next chapter lol. But I did want to mention about your actions sequence. I can get lost VERY easily in action sequences, especially if they're chaotic (which I suppose is the intended feeling lol) but you wrote this scene quite well. I was able to picture everything perfect so I wanted to thank you for that. Whatever you're doing you're doing it right. Love it love I love it!
Oh dear, thank you so much for your kind comment!! I'm so glad you're still enjoying it! I've listened to that song by the Frights like a dozen times since you recommended it!
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