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1. FluffyLordoftheDead12 on Chapter 1 Fri 26 Apr 2024 03:43AM UTC

   

   This is off to a good start! Very gripping stuff, nice exploration of the mother-daughter dynamic, and all quite in character. One thing though, sometimes you drop dialogue tags so I can't tell who's talking.

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2. 1. levi2207 on Chapter 1 Fri 26 Apr 2024 08:59AM UTC

      

      Thank you for the kind words, and yeah sry on the tags. No beta reader yknow?

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