I don't write linearly. I am also working on like a story bible for this fic, because there are so many moving parts and so many things I want to accomplish, and also it's getting long and I can't go back and keep reading it every time I want to write.
SO! I am working on it, though sometimes not so diligently. I have a whole Wallace scene written that happens later, and what I really need to do is just push out the bits that connect it and make my beta deal with its terribleness - but I like giving her things I'm proud of so she doesn't come back with a "Dude, really?" and I'm not just like, "I knooooww."
Also, I've been watching the movie. Like, a LOT. So there's also that.
But rest (somewhat) assured, I am working on this and my other WIPs and eventually there will be another chapter!
(Also, sorry for taking so long to get back to you - I forgot my password and was just like, UGH for a couple of days because I can't remember my password to anything.)
C.Elder (Guest)
on Chapter 3
Thu 13
Nov 201402:25PM UTC
Wow.......great stuff.....poignant, breathless (there should be a warning- will take your breath away?) and a sense of time gone by; opportunities wasted;words that should have been said; a caress missed; a kiss lost forever - can it all ever be re-captured? At 19, we may be immature, but perhaps we are a lot more flexible with each other, a lot more willing to make compromises for each other, a lot more interested in each other. Maybe we are more mature in our 30's but also more set in our ways, more suspicious of motives;less willing to give anything up; less willing to believe that together we can be more than we can be individually.
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