Thank you for your comment! So glad you like the descriptive style - I love writing like that as a bit of a warm up for original works. I often find when I watch TV/movies, a lot of the ones I really love have incredibly atmospheric filmmaking that I immediately know how I would realise in written word!
I rewatched the scene so many times while writing this, I'm glad no one can track how many times I watched the video on Youtube 😂. I did initially think about including the dialogue/banter between them, but the second I wrote that final line I knew I had to leave it as the final line. Never in my life did I think I'd be writing a sensuous description of soap though....
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badwolf_gallagher88 on Chapter 2 Wed 05 Jun 2024 04:33AM UTC
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