Comment on The Price Of Your Song

  1. Aurora_Martell on Chapter 1 Wed 05 Oct 2016 12:09PM UTC

    I always bookmark your stuff.

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    1. solitariusvirtus on Chapter 1 Wed 05 Oct 2016 12:10PM UTC

      solitariusvirtus

      I know. You're a sweetie. I'm waiting to return the favour. :D

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      1. Aurora_Martell on Chapter 1 Wed 05 Oct 2016 12:13PM UTC

        So you're excitedly waiting to bookmark Elegy, aren't you?

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        1. solitariusvirtus on Chapter 1 Wed 05 Oct 2016 12:13PM UTC

          solitariusvirtus

          Yep

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          1. Aurora_Martell on Chapter 1 Wed 05 Oct 2016 12:25PM UTC

            Oh, dear, thank you!

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            1. solitariusvirtus on Chapter 1 Wed 05 Oct 2016 12:45PM UTC

              solitariusvirtus

              :)

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              1. Aurora_Martell on Chapter 1 Wed 05 Oct 2016 12:50PM UTC

                I'm 90 words in.

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                1. solitariusvirtus on Chapter 1 Wed 05 Oct 2016 12:50PM UTC

                  solitariusvirtus

                  k

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                  1. Aurora_Martell on Chapter 1 Wed 05 Oct 2016 01:11PM UTC

                    Is it bad I don't really know how to work with story plots?

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                    1. solitariusvirtus on Chapter 1 Wed 05 Oct 2016 01:22PM UTC

                      solitariusvirtus

                      Nah. You'll learn

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                      1. Aurora_Martell on Chapter 1 Wed 05 Oct 2016 01:29PM UTC

                        I have a friend who keeps saying my stories are whishy-washy (no plot, just backstory).

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                        1. solitariusvirtus on Chapter 1 Wed 05 Oct 2016 01:38PM UTC

                          solitariusvirtus

                          Just keep working on your story then

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                          1. Aurora_Martell on Chapter 1 Wed 05 Oct 2016 02:59PM UTC

                            Do you think my stuff lacks plot?

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                            1. solitariusvirtus on Chapter 1 Wed 05 Oct 2016 03:01PM UTC

                              solitariusvirtus

                              No

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                              1. Aurora_Martell on Chapter 1 Wed 05 Oct 2016 03:03PM UTC

                                What's your opinion on my stories, honestly?

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                                1. solitariusvirtus on Chapter 1 Wed 05 Oct 2016 03:04PM UTC

                                  solitariusvirtus

                                  The ideas are interesting; the delivery needs a bit of polishing.

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                                  1. Aurora_Martell on Chapter 1 Wed 05 Oct 2016 03:05PM UTC

                                    Polishing, how?

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                                    1. solitariusvirtus on Chapter 1 Wed 05 Oct 2016 03:06PM UTC

                                      solitariusvirtus

                                      Practice

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                                      1. Aurora_Martell on Chapter 1 Wed 05 Oct 2016 03:14PM UTC

                                        I do practice just not everyday.

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                                        1. solitariusvirtus on Chapter 1 Wed 05 Oct 2016 03:17PM UTC

                                          solitariusvirtus

                                          Ok, good then

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                                          1. Aurora_Martell on Chapter 1 Wed 05 Oct 2016 03:58PM UTC

                                            I must admit I mimic your style sometimes.

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                                            1. solitariusvirtus on Chapter 1 Wed 05 Oct 2016 04:09PM UTC

                                              solitariusvirtus

                                              Ok

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                                              1. Aurora_Martell on Chapter 1 Wed 05 Oct 2016 04:58PM UTC

                                                I'm off to read your second chapter.

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                                                1. solitariusvirtus on Chapter 1 Wed 05 Oct 2016 04:59PM UTC

                                                  solitariusvirtus

                                                  Have fun

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                                                  1. Aurora_Martell on Chapter 1 Wed 05 Oct 2016 05:04PM UTC

                                                    I loved to see Sansa and Dany interacting.

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                                                    1. solitariusvirtus on Chapter 1 Wed 05 Oct 2016 05:14PM UTC

                                                      solitariusvirtus

                                                      Glad to hear

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