Comment on A little kindness goes a long way

1. Lunarwisp on Chapter 2 Sun 09 Jun 2024 02:20PM UTC

   

   this was such a good read!! with this chapter and the last one i could definitely feel the 😏😏😏 Alhaitham coming through with his actions, but I was also really able to perceive the kind of anxiety that Kaveh was having from it, despite it being Alhaitham's pov and his perception?? If that makes sense?? Basically this is super well written and im v excited for the continuation!! 💕💕

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2. 1. majimastan on Chapter 2 Sat 15 Jun 2024 05:27PM UTC

      

      Thank you so much for reading!! Your comment makes perfect sense and while reading it I was like “Oh Kaveh’s uneasiness is being noticed? My work here is done 🥹”

      Thank you again

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   2. 1. Alan_Doodles on Chapter 2 Sat 27 Jul 2024 10:58PM UTC

         

         I totally agree! I felt I was able to read Kaveh's POV under Alhaitham's here with your descriptions. The poor guy is overthinking it all in the wrong direction.

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