Interstitial, I think this is the beginning of a beautiful friendship. ;-)
You're right. Communication this way is extremely hard. Please don't worry. I wasn't in any way upset or anything. It just occurred to me after you mentioned that yours wasn't porn, that I'd gotten excited about talking to 'You' that i'd forgotten all the context of 'why' I was talking to you in the first place. Totally lost track of who'd written what, 'cause I was just enjoying your comments. LOL
Hope you didn't have to rewash. I hate when I do that.
I know that first day is a whirlwind. I spent it obsessively checking stats and annoying HD. She's a patient soul. I love her. I'm really happy that you got to experience it, though, even with the exhaustion. It's a hell of a ride. I wouldn't trade it for anything! I can't wait to know what it's gonna be like to actually have one completed. I imagine I'll obsessively correct it for months afterward, but I plan to start the second one right afterward, so...we'll see.
Btw...if you have time and are so inclined, I'd love any feedback on my actual writing that you'd like to give. I enjoyed yours and I dug the writing style. I want to improve, so if I find someone good, I try to make it clear that I'm good with criticism. And you're nice, so... heehee! I am aware that my style is loose...not nearly as formal as it was after they trained me up in high school. So there's lots of liberties taken with sentence structure and the insertion of casualness outside of dialog. But, there's a way to do that right, and if you ever have any thoughts on the matter, I'd love to hear them. So, just...FYI
Ok...I'm gonna try to attack chapter 12 again. My brain has refused to work for at least 4 days, now, so this chapter is kicking my ass. Ugh. Thanks again for talking to me. You're a joy! :-)
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GertieCraign on Chapter 1 Thu 06 Oct 2016 07:02PM UTC
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