Comment on There Were Glowing Eyes in the Dark

1. pinechips on Chapter 3 Mon 24 Jun 2024 05:48PM UTC

   

   I realized that I like using Bea's ex as the main plot point. Maybe later I will try it with JC or other of Ava's exes.
   Since the tone is quieter and slower here, it was a bit of a challenge to make the scene interesting (no humor, brutal!).

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2. 1. Alms4Oblivion on Chapter 3 Mon 24 Jun 2024 05:59PM UTC

      

      😂 I love that, and you do it so well!

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