I just started reading and I'm already really invested. Writer, you give Tory a great voice in this fic. In this chapter in particular, I really enjoyed the scene in the Cobra Kai dojo, with Tory musing about Terry Silver's motives. "His lips twitched. Was that a smile? She ground her teeth so hard they hurt. Of course it was. He loved seeing anger in them. He preyed on their fury just like he preyed on their pain." It really gives the sense that even when she is fighting to prove Silver wrong by winning, she is still doing exactly what he wants her to do -- grow colder, something Robby picks up on. So far I'm really enjoying this. Excited to read on.
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lostnfound14 on Chapter 2 Mon 29 Jul 2024 12:34AM UTC
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