Comment on Bestiality/Pokephilia Prompt fic

  1. Lur (Guest) on Chapter 1 Wed 31 Jul 2024 03:17PM UTC

    Awesome, id say maybe tone down the like.. demeanin talk of the characters? I know some people like it but some dont

    Also maybe make the stories abit longer? That gives people more investiment in the story rather then yank and one shot done materials :)

    Other then that yer doing really good :D

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    1. Friskriel15 on Chapter 1 Wed 31 Jul 2024 03:47PM UTC

      I mean…I’ll try?

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      1. Lur (Guest) on Chapter 1 Wed 31 Jul 2024 04:18PM UTC

        All that can be really done right? trying is the best way to improvement :D As the saying goes, practice makes perfect.

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        1. Friskriel15 on Chapter 1 Wed 31 Jul 2024 04:19PM UTC

          Yeah, you’re right

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