Ooo (Guest)
on Chapter 64
Mon 05
Aug 202411:31PM UTC
It's a very beautiful work and I don't want to criticize or anything but I would like to see what will happen with Bastila and her friends. I know Revan will try to stop the Emperor, but what if not? Are Satele and Theron descendants of Revan and Bastila or did Bastila fall in love with someone else? Sorry if I'm asking too many questions but I think this part of your story is really missing before it's finished. It's like watching a series but ending up at the end of the season with an episode that leaves even more questions. that everything and saying that there will be no sequel is like Vikings valhalla from season 3
You are more than welcome to speak on it! I see this as good insight and it let's me explain some things about this whole world I've created too! 😁 After dealing with troll AI comments telling me my writing is shot, this is very refreshing haha😅💙
SO! 👏 In this alternate world I got, Dynamo and Revan are not the same person. They are versions of each other but two separate people.
Dynamo is the Revan of Realm Alpha. Revan is the Dynamo of the Realm of the Force
Yeses, I am planning to write a sequel for it at some point based on KOTOR 2 and one based on the little that we know about KOTOR 3. For now WOTOR as I am calling it lol, is only centered around the events of KOTOR 1
Diverging from the regular Canon, you can argue that Bastila did fall in love with someone else. Instead of Revan, you got Dynamo, who is similar in behaviour to Paragon Revan (at least in the manner I play him in KOTOR ), but still obviously different.
In a sense, my intention was to leave it more open ended even if this ark was finished. It has to lead into the next ark somehow without forcing it too much. 😁 The description does say it is chronologically part 28 of Dynamo's story but I need to fill up the rest haha
Ask as many questions as you wish! I take them in good faith
Ooo (Guest)
on Chapter 64
Tue 06
Aug 202402:47PM UTC
I was almost hoping you would tell me that Bastila was pregnant and that she had finally lost the courage to tell him to let him do his job or to let him go without making him doubt or that she was aware that Dynamos was going to suffer there . his immortality and his love for her and his child I think it would have been even more tragic for them both but I would have liked to see Dynamos' reaction when he understood Bastila's sacrifice for him by not telling him anything about her child. I don't know today I like stories with a bittersweet ending but the characters are alive
Ah yes! That would have definitely been good!
Only problem is that I didn't want Dynamo to have a child with her, even at the cost of the canon. It just didn't fit where he was at that point in time. I will figure out a way to incorporate something because I do want Satele to be part of my AU Canon too since she's an absolute badace :)))
Also, even if she was pregnant... in some alternate story, while it would have hurt a lot, the tragedy still remains that he would have left. At this point in time, he is obsessed with the mission, personal relations none withstanding. There might have been a promise of coming back but Dynamo cannot accept being with someone that is not at least willing to become immortal.
I still tried to make it bittersweet even though they are all alive, especially since he breaks off the Dyad so a piece of him is forever lost
I do have the draft of a sort of sequel which is so outdated it badly needs a rewrite🤣🤣 as well as prequel/ intermission, the latter is basically the Brotherhood of Shadow Solomon's Revenge mod. I'll eventually get to them lol
Right now I am chipping away at chronological part 9 I believe
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