I've read a lot of fanfics in my life, but none were like this one. This story knows how to delve into a lot of subjects without making the story too boring or convoluted. The characters' personalities are very faithful to the original series, especially in the scene where Mikey eats "potato chips" in Donnie's bed, I can really imagine that scene in the series. And I really can't describe the feeling I had reading this story, so I'm going to use an excerpt from Flamengo anthem to express myself: "In the regatta, he kills me, mistreats me, takes me away, With emotion in my heart!"
(I apologize if there's any part written wrong, I'm still not good at English)
First of all, your English is just fine. I really appreciate you taking time to give me feedback on this story. Thank you. I did my best to stay true to each character while still giving them space to grow (you will see more of that growth in book 2!)
I looked up the Flamengo anthem so I could get a better understanding of your expression. Wow! I am truly humbled by this excerpt and that you feel so passionately about my story. Thank you again. I hope the next book measures up to your expectations!
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ValentonaDo14 on Chapter 71 Wed 07 Aug 2024 03:14AM UTC
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