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  1. FromADenOfBeasts on Chapter 11 Sat 24 Aug 2024 11:07PM UTC

    I personally love the way I did Cain and Abel but I'm probably biased.

    I should have thought about that, but considering the kind of story I'm writing, and how I wanted to make a point about Miranda's confidence, I feel like this works away.

    Unfortunately the next few chapters are incredibly slow, so I don't think they're my best work. Hopefully the character moments make up for that though?

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    1. SymbolismEgg on Chapter 11 Mon 26 Aug 2024 07:21AM UTC

      The first humans experiencing grief for the first time was dramatic. Curious about the foreshadowed Noah family (biblical edition) drama.

      Yeah, it does work as a way to showcase Miranda being more confident, which is always fun.

      No worries, I also enjoy character moments!

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