This chapter has changed a LOT since I read it last holy shit. I love the way you now build up this thing of. it explains why they are suited to the superhero game, and you get this glimpse of what they all become, it’s so good. everyone has this solid basis and they make sense as handpicked choices for this team, and knowing where these five are at years later,, this chapter hits hard
YAYY I'm actually so glad you revisited since, like you said, the intro has changed so much since it was originally posted. (and I'm super stoked to hear that it actually does set up the o5 character arcs; the original fit more closely with my rough drafts that I wrote YEARS ago, and the series as a whole has changed enough since that I knew some things had to be reworked). Thnx as always for the read/comment, so happy you enjoy :)
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