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  1. How_about_me (Lilyslaboratory) on Chapter 1 Wed 28 Aug 2024 02:32PM UTC

    I think being delulu is the only way we can cope with Alastor's existence 🤣 (I don't want him to be a villain...)
    I loved the first chapter, especially the reenactment of the scene where Niffty kills Adam it's as funny as on screen. In general I really like reenactments in fics, I think it goes a long way to get the readers in the mood in any case, give them the impression that they are taking the fix where they left the show you know ?

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    1. SleepyMorning on Chapter 1 Wed 28 Aug 2024 02:37PM UTC

      I'm glad it's fun XD I was worried that it was too close to the original when I first wrote it lol like it was repetitive, but I'm glad you're enjoying my fic so far :D

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      1. How_about_me (Lilyslaboratory) on Chapter 1 Wed 28 Aug 2024 02:56PM UTC

        I mean, if was close to the original but in a good way ! I get so confused when the fic just starts off with no context and I'm like "Ok wait, where were we again ? ". Honestly if you could write me the whole show as a prequel to the fic I'd die happy (I am aware most people wouldn't like that though 😞)
        (Second chapter now, loving it)

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        1. SleepyMorning on Chapter 1 Wed 28 Aug 2024 02:57PM UTC

          💖

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