Comment on i came prepared for absolution (if you'd only ask)

  1. BlatantBookworm on Chapter 1 Mon 23 Sep 2024 01:57PM UTC

    This is very well done.

    I live the half line about liking Nate but Roy not fully trusting him again yet. Roy desperately calling Ted is great.

    I also do love minor sadist coach Roy who immediately panics when he realised he went too far. It very much tracks as his character, a hard trainer who really does care but doesnt fully grasp what limits are.

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