Yappiii new chapter!!! heheheh don't apologize,, you are already giving us so much for free and out of passion to share your thoughts brought to life. Gonna eat this chapter and lick the plate clean!!
omg, don't tell me the forest looks similar to cheonliang's forests?!?!? Man Vin's trauma memory is so good to remember the resembles of cheonliang's forest,,,
DAMN THEY MEETING THE BOSS OF THE SECOND FLOOR!??! OH IM EXCITED!! love the way you are writing Vin with this scene,,,
MIRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!! LET'S GOOOO!!! helfheshfsk jealous Vin, he just conflicted about his crush not liking him back😔😔
Youngest member??? I wonder if they going to appear again??? hehehehhehe,,,
helhfephfjlek Duke noticing Vin's jealous aura and thinking he is just imagining things helfhehsfeslkjes Vin's dragon insticts truly be kicking in,,,
SHE A NECROMANCER LET'S GOOOOO!!! omg her abilities are so goated.
Yappiii Mary is safe,,,,
DAMN TAEJIN HAS SOMETHING AGAINST NECROMANCERS JESUS
Oh vin is reading mira so much, I bet Mira had seen their classes and was nervous, she trusts Zack but I can sense she is unsure about Vin. UUUUU this tension is so nicely built!!!
OMG ZACK'S CARD REVEAL IS HAPPENING HELEFPEHFLJ I CAN'T BREATHE THIS IS SO HELFHEPH HELEFPEHF IM' WITH YOU MIRA!! THAT'S HILARIOUSHEFLSHF
OMG THIS BACKSTORY HELFPEJ IT CAME TRUE, JOHAN YOU CURSED ZACK!!
omg, zack adding Vin and duke to come with them,,, hehehheheh i know your motive Zack!!
helhfpehflj the pink panda talk!!! these sillies,,,,
thank you for the chapter!! it was delicious!!! can't wait for more!!! Thank youuuu!!!!!<33333
I know but I will still bad for giving you something that isn't that good💕
Actually in this part, it was Vin suddenly noticing the talchum dancers as the forest similar to Cheongliang will probably appear in the third floor(the dancers still bring up his trauma anyways).
At first I wasn't sure how they would first meet the boss but this idea suddenly came to my mind and I found it fitting as it would be strange if the boss appeared in an obvious place or something. I'm happy you like how I wrote this scene😊
Yes! Zack's best friend appeared and with that a bit of jealousy came too!
Well, being sincere the idea of Mira's youngest party member came from Wonshik of your idea as I wanted to add him but give some clues that he would appear later so this sounded like a good start.
Duke just prefers to be oblivious to that as his life has become crazy enough with the apocalypse starting xD. The instincts are stronger than Vin for aure xD.
Mira deserves to be a badass and I actually don't know why but her being a badass seemed pretty fitting.
Yes! Vin can now relax a bit as his sister is safe(and probably kicking ass as the bamf she is).
I mean, I may have an idea that at least two certain ghost connected to Vin may go around in some floors of the dungeon or that Taejin may be weak towards necromancers...I' m not sure yet❤️
Actually, I explained that Mira can't see the classes as she choose not to upgrade that part of her class but she might do it later(the reason why Mira was unsure was because of something she heard a talchum dancer says which was something that hinted at her being somewhat similar to someone both Vin and Taejin knew).
Look, no matter how I saw it I didn't think Mira would laugh with him revealing his cards to her unless there was some backstory that made it hilarious and what better story than this one and also having Johan being part of it?
Johan truly cursed Zack, he is lucky that he wasn't in Seoul because Zack would probably punch him if he had seen him bow xD.
Zack is a soft baby but yes, he certainly added Vin in the plan because of certain feelings he doesn't realize he has.
I'm pretty sure the pink panda will be mentioned again at some point because I love the idea of MiraZack hugging their own pink pandas while Duke and Vin look at them with a 'Tired & Done with their shit' look xD
Thank you! I'm very happy that you enjoyed this chapter🥰💕
It's okay, I would feel more bad if you would stress yourself too much over on if I'm going to like it or not. I'm going to like it regardless since you brought it back to life and are contributing to writing a story for such a rarepair!! All it matters you tried at the skill level you have on writing fighting scenes, that is still a lot from you, progress isn't linear in skill learning. Can't wait to read more of this story!!! Heheheh you got this!!
Omg I had already forgotten about Wonshik. Omg Can't wait to see how you are going to write this oc. I hope you freely write your version of Wonshik!!
the two certain ghosts.. man💔💔 the both ideas sound amazing!!
Oh i must've have read that wrong, thank you for correcting,,, OMG I CAN*T WAIT TO READ THAT REVEAL
helhfehf the pinkpanda has to be their new family member, Imagine the pink bear becoming the dungeon baby's nanny,,,
Don't worry, it is a me thing that happens whenever I write something I am not really good at writing or I don't like how it went. It happens often but after posting the what I wrote I tend to be able to ignore it. Thank you🥰
I already have ideas for him! I might make him appear in the third floor and have the Seongji or Sujin floor be the fourth before the dungeon baby appears in the fifth floor❤️
I can always try to use both...have Mira see the two ghosts on their own floor or the one before Taejin and then in the last one while VinZack confronts their biggest fear, Mira and Duke fight Taejin?
That's okay, I hope you will like it💕
Maybe I will have Mira kidnap one before they actually leave the second floor...or maybe where the baby is, there is a pink panda to keep them company? I will see ehat comes to my mind❤️
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