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  1. Salander7 on Chapter 3 Thu 26 Sep 2024 12:48AM UTC

    What a fun chapter! I loved this interaction and heard Lupe’s voice in my head:
    “ “You didn’t have to run over here like a total freak,” Greta teased…” 😂
    “I didn’t run ,” Lupe dismissed, looking her over as she knelt in the sand. “Nice swimsuit, though.”

    And what a gift someone like May is, to just see you and call it like it is without any judgment. It’s so effortless to be friends with people like that.

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    1. trifoliumbaby on Chapter 3 Thu 26 Sep 2024 04:08PM UTC

      I'm so glad you enjoyed it & that the character voices feel authentic! Lupe is so fun to write, and I agree that May is an absolute treasure (': Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

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