Comment on Kinship

  1. i hope the hotel personnel riots. even when a child is awful, they are a child. wish i could teleport into the story and beat some ass.

    i adore this. the way your characters have developed makes SENSE!! you can clearly see the journey, and the way the show charas might have grown if they had been allowed. incredible. i will also say that the emotional factor in this chapter? heartrendering. there is something to be said to the muted heartbreak here.. poor chloe

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