Finally got thru chapter 2. Roman's "It's ok Archie, just take a deep breath.." KILLED me!🤣🤣 And I cannot WAIT to see all their reactions to Yzma's human self. I've also been wondering why Snacher and Mozenrath weren't confused whenever Roman talks about dust bc as far as I know, they don't associate the word "dust" with ammo. 😹 Other than that, LOVED this! I also like how insecure Mozenrath is now about himself being a ruler at 18 not being impressive anymore. 😂
Just FYI, I ended up retconning Mozenrath's age to something else later on (more around 20s) to make the backstory work better, but he is still a youngin :-)
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