Comment on Of Trenchcoats, Hoods, and the Spellwork of Souls

1. Aricliara on Chapter 2 Sat 12 Oct 2024 02:50PM UTC

   

   Language is something I put a lot of thought into in this series--I kinda have to, with how so many words have extra meaning and weight, I have to be sure I've chosen the right one to actually put on the page--so that means a lot! Not that your comment doesn't mean a lot already, that bit just means extra a lot.

   I can totally word. Yup.

   Thank you for reading and commenting!

   Last Edited Sat 12 Oct 2024 02:51PM UTC

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2. 1. Undersea_Warrior_Priestess on Chapter 2 Sun 03 Nov 2024 04:28PM UTC

      

      You CAN totally word! And word well! It's just so poetic the way you use repetition and capitals and other types of emphasis to change the meaning of things. It's so very well done

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   2. 1. Aricliara on Chapter 2 Sun 03 Nov 2024 06:41PM UTC

         

         Thank you so much!

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