It was a very fun read, great concept. I have never thought about it before, but in fact, Sejanus Plinth has something in his character similar to Peter Parker, some kind of softness and clumsiness. ;) I also love Sejanus being bullied (of course, I don't like Sejanus being bullied, just like the topic, especially when at the end he stops being bullied or has his revenge). And Marvel/ TBOSAS crossover is something I wouldn't think even some time ago, but well, after some time here I'm thinking about everything :D.
I really like Coriolanus here. I wouldn't even call him soft (which, for me, is a big advantage, though of course, everyone has their preferences in portraying characters). To me, he feels quite canon so far—you’ve made him speak in a way that reminds me of how he interacted with Sejanus at the beginning of the book. But there’s also this sense that he’s hiding something himself (which is probably true!).
And Sejanus is as adorable as ever :). Good luck with your writing and I'd love to read the next chapter.
Thank you the review! I love getting descriptive comments like this one, really makes my day.
The spidey-sej concept came to me this January tbh when I saw an edit on tiktok, and it just hasn't left my brain ever since!! Tbosas and Marvel are my two main fandoms (with Heathers lol) and I just knew I had to write a crossover at some point! Doing it with snowjanus (my otp) felt nothing but write eheh
I'm also glad you think Coryo is in character, I'm always scared I'm gonna fuck his writing up so hearing this makes me very happy! Thanks!! <33
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