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  1. Carnival_Sleeper on Chapter 2 Tue 29 Oct 2024 04:30AM UTC

    Rowan whispered, “He's not completely wrong, you know. “

    “I beg your absolute pardon?” Hazel eyed her brother.

    Lol, I love the way Hazel speaks sometimes :) You've really given her a lot of dimension. You've taken the time to develop her so much that she really feels like a part of this world.

    And then I just love your chilly, autumnal descriptions in this chapter. With the trees and the log cabins 🌲🍁 It's so wonderful. The Fall mood always hits me at this time of year, so it's nice that your story is set in this season.

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    1. dlbexley on Chapter 2 Tue 29 Oct 2024 11:19PM UTC

      The timing of this is uncanny. The story is going to have quite a bit of fall, winter, and politics, so it is weirdly appropriate somehow ;)

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